I really like your use of alliteration in this one. Taylor, I love the layout of your blog. You have done a great job combining art and poetry. As I read through your poems, I particularly like the haikus; I appreciate the specificity. As a creative writing teacher, I am always encouraging my students to use specific sensory details; I am seeing this in your haikus. I can’t help but share some photographs with you and present you with a writing challenge. I am attaching a link to an amazing photographer. Choose a photograph and write a series of connected haikus using one photograph as an inspiration. Attempt to use as many sensory details as you can. Perhaps, you could focus on one sensory detail for each haiku. I realize that these photographs are not typical topics for haikus, but they all have a built in narrative, and that is why I like them so much. Taylor, I am encouraged by your poetic endeavors. We need more poets in the world today. Have a great week! http://www.vivianmaier.com/
I really like your use of alliteration in this one. Taylor, I love the layout of your blog. You have done a great job combining art and poetry. As I read through your poems, I particularly like the haikus; I appreciate the specificity. As a creative writing teacher, I am always encouraging my students to use specific sensory details; I am seeing this in your haikus. I can’t help but share some photographs with you and present you with a writing challenge. I am attaching a link to an amazing photographer. Choose a photograph and write a series of connected haikus using one photograph as an inspiration. Attempt to use as many sensory details as you can. Perhaps, you could focus on one sensory detail for each haiku. I realize that these photographs are not typical topics for haikus, but they all have a built in narrative, and that is why I like them so much. Taylor, I am encouraged by your poetic endeavors. We need more poets in the world today. Have a great week! http://www.vivianmaier.com/